Morning becomes more beautiful.

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MORNING BECOMES MORE BEAUTIFUL

Morning becomes more beautiful,
when you witness the nature waking you up;
when you watch the element of nature performing welcome dance;
when you wonder how it engrosses our varied attention.
When my eyes stayed on you, my mind was talking to me - 'the last night's sleep with the planning for tomorrow was filled with zealotic consumption of time but the morning for which you pre-planned becomes more beautiful when confronted with such magnificent acts of nature and you lost the count of time.'
Why are you impeding my mind which was strongly organised? (I was trying to reclaim my mind from that scene)
And the voice heard said 'let your mind for atleast once be your heart.'
I was standstill there for a half-an-hour, or maybe more.I only knew was I lost the hold of time which I thought I was not, not atleast before this beautiful morning.
The voice I heard was of my heart, teaching me to stop, to stop to such an unprecedented beauty, to embrace the unembraced, to experience the inexplicable.
Then aroused a blissful realisation,
Morning becomes more beautiful when you learn of being a part of nature.

#13 th April 2020.
Morning becomes more beautiful. A poem heart felt and hand typed after I encountered this scene. My eyes captured greater pixel resolution than my phone's lens😉

Comments

  1. UnknownApril 13, 2020 at 12:28 PM

    Really amazing writing nd person has heartful soul

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  2. NeerajApril 13, 2020 at 1:07 PM

    It's really incredible. I liked the way you instilled your emotions in writing this story. Keep it up.

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  3. UnknownApril 13, 2020 at 1:25 PM

    It's really amazing the way u write your emotions and thoughts you really seeming to have good skills in it.... Keep writing I'm waiting for more

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  4. UnknownApril 13, 2020 at 2:28 PM

    The struggle u r in today is developing the strength you need for tomorrow buddy its,really inspiring👌👌👍👍

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  5. AlanApril 13, 2020 at 4:46 PM

    Blissful! This has a freshness of nature. All what matters is are the readers able to connect to your ideology the thought process...well by the end I had felt the freshness. :) guess you have succeeded in connecting me 🙂👍

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    1. SWATHIApril 13, 2020 at 5:33 PM

      Hi Alan, we are all just a car crash. An unexpected writing connects us. Many passes by and some traverse. I'm happy to reply to someone who travelled through. Thank you so much 🙂

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  6. UnknownApril 13, 2020 at 6:53 PM

    Just phenomenal !! It makes to feel the sparkle of beautiful morning and may be every reader wants to capture the essence of nature. The way you reflect your emotions is awesome.

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    1. SWATHIApril 13, 2020 at 7:17 PM

      Thank you 🙂
      Well! That's the irony actually, capturing essence of nature

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  7. NoorneeluApril 13, 2020 at 8:14 PM

    Excellent through and well expressed it..

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  8. NikitaApril 13, 2020 at 8:46 PM

    Beautiful❤️❤️words given by heart... beautiful

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  9. MadhuriApril 14, 2020 at 1:11 PM

    Beautiful lines from beautiful heart 💓

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  10. RavinderMay 9, 2020 at 8:38 AM

    Morning becomes more beautiful after reading this writing ��

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  11. PreethiJuly 20, 2020 at 8:35 AM

    Superb 💓.ny how have a beautiful morning dear beautiful

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  12. UnknownJuly 20, 2020 at 8:44 PM

    Great job ra

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